TheElf Posted October 27, 2013 Posted October 27, 2013 (edited) 9,000 pageviews on my DA page! Here is a quick Millia piece updated for 2013 http://leelf.deviantart.com/art/ROBOTECH-Rick-this-is-Miriya-409719610 Edited October 27, 2013 by TheElf Quote
Knight26 Posted October 27, 2013 Posted October 27, 2013 Very nice, your anatomy work is definitely getting better. Something about the proportions still feels a little off though, I just can't place my finger on it, her head maybe? Quote
TehPW Posted October 27, 2013 Posted October 27, 2013 i like it, percieved faults (if any) and all... Quote
TheElf Posted October 28, 2013 Author Posted October 28, 2013 thanks guys. @Knight, I went back and looked and it turns out you were right. I fixed her head. As an aside, larger heads, mostly due to outrageous hair were a hallmark of mikimoto's in the early 80's. Quote
chillyche Posted November 1, 2013 Posted November 1, 2013 I really like it. Love the face. But she kinda doesn't have much of a torso. Now, I know that as we stray from anatomical into cartoon art styles, the torsos for women shrink, accentuating more hips and breasts, but her hips seem to start at the bottom of her rib cage, which sorta leaves very little room for her internal organs. Give her one more belt's width above her belt, and I think you'd be in better shape, but still be in the realm of exaggerated proportions we expect from the illustration style. Quote
TheElf Posted November 2, 2013 Author Posted November 2, 2013 I really like it. Love the face. But she kinda doesn't have much of a torso. Now, I know that as we stray from anatomical into cartoon art styles, the torsos for women shrink, accentuating more hips and breasts, but her hips seem to start at the bottom of her rib cage, which sorta leaves very little room for her internal organs. Give her one more belt's width above her belt, and I think you'd be in better shape, but still be in the realm of exaggerated proportions we expect from the illustration style. Chilly, Thanks for the feed back. You are right though...I am WAY off. LOL Quote
chillyche Posted November 7, 2013 Posted November 7, 2013 Ha. Hopefully she never has to digest any food. Quote
miriya Posted November 7, 2013 Posted November 7, 2013 Beautiful. The breasts are a bit too spherical and anti gravity for my taste (I like natural) but still lovely. Good work Quote
chillyche Posted November 13, 2013 Posted November 13, 2013 Although, maybe there is selective artificial gravity? Quote
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