MAX DYRL JENIUS Posted August 21, 2003 Posted August 21, 2003 Here are my first two wallpapers based on macross... feel free to tell what you think of it Quote
UN Spacy Posted August 21, 2003 Posted August 21, 2003 Keep up the great work MAX DYRL JENIUS! How long did it take to finsh both of the wallpapers? If you're going to make anymore if the 2nd type, you shouldn't wash out the characters so much. Quote
MAX DYRL JENIUS Posted August 21, 2003 Author Posted August 21, 2003 It took me about 1 hour for each, I still have some problems with my toshop but I'm trying to do my best... maybe the 7.0 will be better for me ... Quote
DEATH Posted August 21, 2003 Posted August 21, 2003 hey great work itw bout 100 times beter than anything i could do in an hour Quote
the white drew carey Posted August 21, 2003 Posted August 21, 2003 I have become the bearer of bad news... <_< The concepts are sound, but there are several glaring problems which detract from the final product. First off... Sara. I like the idea a lot. But the absolute foremost action you should take is to clean up the lines around Sara and the M-Zero logo so you don't get that choppy cut and paste effect. This is best done using layers and blending the images together. Secondly, the font you've used is OK, but you need to snazzy it up a bit instead of doing one simple block color. The second wallpaper is better, but Max, Hikaru and the Valk all still suffer from the white clutter as well. Quote
MAX DYRL JENIUS Posted August 21, 2003 Author Posted August 21, 2003 Your bad news give me the will to do better the next time I'll try to make a better version of them... Quote
Mathieu Posted August 21, 2003 Posted August 21, 2003 Yeah I agree with the white drew carey. Also , when you use too much filter to give special effects, it sometimes gives a messed up result. The most simple wallpapers are often the best looking ones. Quote
Agent ONE Posted August 21, 2003 Posted August 21, 2003 Psychodelic thchno background behind a simple island girl like Sarah... <_< nah. Clean her up... Drop something classic and inspiring behind her if you must, but the Matrix background has got to go. Quote
the white drew carey Posted August 21, 2003 Posted August 21, 2003 Another good idea is, once your done, fiddle around with a nice gaussian blur filter. If you find the happy medium, it'll clean up any pixelation without becoming too blurry. Quote
IIymij Posted August 22, 2003 Posted August 22, 2003 hi hi i have very lil / limited talent in wall papers but id really be happy to hear your comments and such i made this one 800.600 hope you odnt mind... http://members.shaw.ca/iiymij/jpeg/skyisland2.jpg y does it have a vf-2ss and macross plus lyrics? i dunno... i love the 2ss next to the 19 but this song is my fav amoung all others in macross (jap version as well) well tell me wthca think it would flatter me if yuou told me you acutally use this as your wallpapper =)) Quote
Mathieu Posted August 22, 2003 Posted August 22, 2003 hi hi i have very lil / limited talent in wall papers but id really be happy to hear your comments and suchi made this one 800.600 hope you odnt mind... http://members.shaw.ca/iiymij/jpeg/skyisland2.jpg y does it have a vf-2ss and macross plus lyrics? i dunno... i love the 2ss next to the 19 but this song is my fav amoung all others in macross (jap version as well) well tell me wthca think it would flatter me if yuou told me you acutally use this as your wallpapper =)) Very nice clean design! The location and the size of the elements of your wallpaper create a great harmony. I really feel the mood of Mac + in this wallpaper. Quote
MAX DYRL JENIUS Posted August 22, 2003 Author Posted August 22, 2003 hi hi i have very lil / limited talent in wall papers but id really be happy to hear your comments and suchi made this one 800.600 hope you odnt mind... http://members.shaw.ca/iiymij/jpeg/skyisland2.jpg y does it have a vf-2ss and macross plus lyrics? i dunno... i love the 2ss next to the 19 but this song is my fav amoung all others in macross (jap version as well) well tell me wthca think it would flatter me if yuou told me you acutally use this as your wallpapper =)) I like it very soft and pleasant... Quote
MAX DYRL JENIUS Posted August 22, 2003 Author Posted August 22, 2003 I'm proud to be the second! Dat just a question : what is a VERITECH fighter ? I only know VALKYRIES fighters.... But I like it even if the pilot is impolite Quote
IIymij Posted August 22, 2003 Posted August 22, 2003 oopsie sorry guys i kinda gave you my almost finished piece of art work eh ehehhe a very small addition of white trail marks @ the wings i was gonna do very feint ones for the tail fins too but it looked a lil clustered after anways here it is very small difference http://members.shaw.ca/iiymij/jpeg/skyisla...and800x6002.jpg also took out the lil ball on the top left corner im hoping to get better skills and perhpas one day be a web designer and such much apreciated if your spreading my work / name around thanks ya 'all Quote
CaptRico Posted August 22, 2003 Posted August 22, 2003 Great job, man! Keep it up. Anyways, it's good to be back - new account, new signature, avatar, etc. Anyways, let's see more! Quote
DatterBoy Posted August 22, 2003 Posted August 22, 2003 MAX: I believe a Veritech is the US name for Valkyrie. Other than that, they are the same thing. ANyone know different? Dat Quote
Black_Viper Posted August 23, 2003 Posted August 23, 2003 MAX:I believe a Veritech is the US name for Valkyrie. Other than that, they are the same thing. ANyone know different? Dat Veritech is the name rowboattech used when it chopped and dubbed Macross. There the same thing the VF-1 Veritech and the VF-1 Valkyrie just different names. Quote
MAX DYRL JENIUS Posted August 23, 2003 Author Posted August 23, 2003 that's what I meant but I forgot the robocrap name... I was kidding Quote
Commander McBride Posted August 23, 2003 Posted August 23, 2003 According to some sources I've seen, Veritech is jus tthe term for a VF, and the VF-1 is called a Veritech Valkyrie. But it'd be better if ou just removed all mention of that unholy word from that otherwise bitchin' image. Quote
Agent ONE Posted August 26, 2003 Posted August 26, 2003 hi hi i have very lil / limited talent in wall papers but id really be happy to hear your comments and suchi made this one 800.600 hope you odnt mind... http://members.shaw.ca/iiymij/jpeg/skyisland2.jpg y does it have a vf-2ss and macross plus lyrics? i dunno... i love the 2ss next to the 19 but this song is my fav amoung all others in macross (jap version as well) well tell me wthca think it would flatter me if yuou told me you acutally use this as your wallpapper =)) Wow, that is really great. The small pics in the corner really add impact to the lines of the VF-2. Quote
IIymij Posted August 26, 2003 Posted August 26, 2003 ehhe thanks for the good news guys =) i guess ill go try to make some more sometime hopefully they will turn out just as great any themes or ideas you guys want? ill try to put them into the next wallpaper hopefully when school starts they will look twcie as good Quote
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