It looks very nice. the cockpit though blends too much with the whole Redish queadlunn. The original art DYRL Gold book, has it as in a dark brown or dark grey with metalic acentualtions. The cockpit shoulder pads are usualy lighter than the whole cockpit the red millia has them medium blue colored, and the Max Queadlunn bluer/pinkish than millias...
The dark shading on the blood red, IMO, it seems a bit over due. Still a great scheme though.